I can't say it any Clearer.

Discussion in 'Archives' started by Catch the Rain, Oct 12, 2007.

  1. Catch the Rain As the world falls down ♥

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    New Poem ^^

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    I
    Long to be with you, more than any other, you are the
    One who gets me the most, the one that I
    Value the highest
    Even when things seem tough
    You are always there for me, to help and hold my hand
    Over all others, you are the one I dream about
    Understand it now?

    ***

    I know it is only short, but there was nothing more to be said.
     
  2. Nailpolish <3 Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Short poems are usually the best, yours is beautiful =] Not because its short and I don't get bored, but because you can put so many emotions in that little peice of writing!
     
  3. Catch the Rain As the world falls down ♥

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    Thank you very much ^^


    :)
     
  4. Luka Deafening silence

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    bit short but very good you have talent ^^
     
  5. Catch the Rain As the world falls down ♥

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    lmao thanks xDD

    :glomp:

    I normally write long pieces, but I wanted this piece to be short so I don't mind ^^
     
  6. Shuhbooty moon child

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    I write short ones too T.T. But it's good. Very easy, right to the point also. Great job! ^^
     
  7. micketymike Twilight Town Denizen

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    tat was vary good i have to agree 100% with sanctuaryheaven
     
  8. Catch the Rain As the world falls down ♥

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    Thanks ^^ I saw your short one earlier, it was really good too :)

    :) Glad that you liked it ^^