Well I'm bored and can't sleep and have no homework to do so I'm gonna expand on the little poem in my sig. The Prophecy Pt.1 I am gone, but not lost. I will go through rain, fire, and frost. To the land where the promises lay. But I shall return one day There shall be a beacon for all to see. And you shall know that it is me. The Prophecy Pt.2 I arrive in the place of destination. But it seems like place of damnation. All I was promised is no where to be seen. Is this a message? What does it mean? I sought the truth and found only a lie. Is this the place where I will die? The Prophecy Pt.3 Broken promises and a changed mind. You believe my words to be a great find. There is no truth there is only lies. Men rot, decay and become food for flies. Time brings death and I bring life. I spread my wings and wipe away strife The Prophecy Pt.4 Mind changed again, I return to the start. To tie up loose ends in this work of art. I arrive and find it is not the same. I return with no honor and fame. All those I once knew are no where in sight. As if they all fell in an unseen fight.
I really like it, GX. Theres some parts where you could use like an extra word or syllable to keep the flow a bit better, but the concept of it is great and it's a unique thing that usually goes unexplored in poems. However, you bad boy, you put it in the wrong section. *whips* Good job though.
wow. tallent :D:D its really good. I love a lot of the lines that show deep metaphors. What O R A N G E said was right :D put some extra words to make it flow nicer. ^^ great job nonetheless.
