Traditional Art I AM STUMPED. Again.

So basically we have to make an A2 poster on a person in our class (we picked a name out of a hat). Though we're in a bit of dump (*AGAIN*) since we had to somehow finish it in the span of 3 hours. I didn't even HAVE a fix idea yet. Finish in 3 hours, but printed by tomorrow, beginning of class. Luckily, our teacher isn't here tomorrow so I thought I'd finish it at home then print at school during the day. But since working on A2 on this computer is bordering the impossible, I simply tried to adjust what I did already. Saaad, saaaad. ]:





I really think the main problem is the spacing of the many elements; I tried to fix it to a max - it was much worse before - but I'd like some suggestions and thoughts. But crits sure as hell aren't limited to that, say whatever you feel and if I feel I can adjust it, I'll do it tomorrow. Also, in the second version I tried to play more with the traditional side by adding papers and stuff, so you can give your opinions on that. It's admittedly not worked on at all though.

 

i think it looks very cool! i love the way it is white on black not vise versa... in my oppinion i like the second one better, the face of the girl however is a little too light in the second one. if you are sticking with the first one you could add something under her arm or something it is a little bare there, but try not to crowd it... other than that i tink it looks PERFECT! XP

 

Yup, ended up doing the first but with a mix of the texture in the second. And also, added a spider under her arm to try and balance it, like suggested. Here's the final results I printed! The girl I did on ended up really liking it.



Also, did a little sketch on an idea I had in my mind for one of the propositions--- I like the results, but the perspective (around the ground anyway) is kinda fail. D':

 

wow it looks really good! i love your style of drawing ^^