Digital Art I Am Him Vol.1

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by GhettoXemnas, Jan 9, 2009.

  1. GhettoXemnas literally dead inside

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    T'is a Mixtape cover for a friend of mine. I know it's not that great. I need work, especially when it comes to covers. It's supposed to look like this

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    I want critique. Tell me how to improve, not "I like teh tats but itz 2 drk -10/10"
     
  2. SplitOverload Chaser

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    Why do you want it to be so similar to the C3 album, that ****'s wack ass anyways. Make it original. But right now, it's looking good. At least the tatoos are.
     
  3. GhettoXemnas literally dead inside

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    Lol I don't really give a **** what it looks like. This is what the guy requested.
     
  4. Chad Thundercucc The dharma of valvu; the dream of a clatoris

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    lolz Hai gaiz.

    Anyway, all I find wrong is that it needs more light on the face like lil Wayne's does. A light source or maybe some blurred brushes would fix that right up. Otherwise, it's good.
     
  5. Sumi suicidé

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    The tatoos look like the're just text you put on a picture. The other text is too bright. More effect and maybe light would be a tad better.
    The font was matched well though.​
     
  6. Rissy Queen of the Clouds

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    For the tattoos, you should try adding some wort of distorted effect to it. Or ageing. Because it looks like it was just added to the picture, but for more of a look-a-like look, then try making the text at the bottom the same. I actually know the font name for it, it's 'Jane Austen'. So look that up on dafont, and you'll be good.
    Nice job though. (:
     
  7. GhettoXemnas literally dead inside

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    Thanks, I'll be sure to DL that font. ;o
     
  8. Cody Chaser

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    try lowering the opacity and make the text thinner.