I am fire.

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  1. Azure Flame Banned

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    This is a poem I just made for the contest.

    Hear me crackle,
    See me dance,
    But be wary,
    Of your pants.
    Get too close,
    And you will see,
    How very hot,
    I can be.
    Who am I?
    I'm not a liar.
    Let me tell you,
    I am fire.
     
  2. Juicy Chaser

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    You spelt liar wrong ^^

    Its okay, I guess you wanted it kind of lighthearted?
     
  3. Azure Flame Banned

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    Uh, no. I just spelt it wrong on accident. I'll fix it here and the contest.
     
  4. Juicy Chaser

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    No, I meant you wanted the poem to be lighthearted xD The line "but be wary, of your pants" hardly makes it seem serious, right?
     
  5. Azure Flame Banned

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    Oh, yeah. It's part serious, part funny. I just thought about fire, and it came to me.
     
  6. TheMagicalMisterMistoffelees Professional Crazy

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    LIAR LIAR PANTS ON FIRE :L

    Sorry, it had to be said.
     
  7. Kenni-Chan King's Apprentice

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    It's good, I liked it, but the 'be wary of your pants' made me laugh, I guess thinking of fire made you think of: 'liar, liar, pants on fire' huh? XD
     
  8. Azure Flame Banned

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    Thank you. I was going for part serious, part comical.