Digital Art How's dem cubes doin'?

http://sacraficial-love.deviantart.com/art/Cube-licious-96615536

Got pretty bored. And someone's piece on deviant art inspired me.

Crit plz ;o

 

WEll I can tell you are bored so I'll say that for being bored, that's a nice peice of artwork there. Good job. Although the background could be white instead of black.

 

It's more of a dark blue. But yeah I agree. XD White was my initial choice anyway.

 

LOL that was random. But I've got to admit, those are some fine looking cubes right there.

 

When doing pentools and such, work with some feathering so the edges aren't so sharp.

It's a simple thing. There's not much to say. Colors aren't bad and the bg can be a light yellow for a better feel.

 

lol um, those edges are all stroked. =/

Posting a v2 in a bit. Making the bg brighter.

 

pentool, stroke same procedure lawl

 

I stroked in a seperate layer... but yeah. lawl

http://sacraficial-love.deviantart.com/art/Cube-licious-LIGHT-96630784

Lighter version ftw

 

For this one, I'd suggest those other cubes that are hardly visible anymore to be...visible. How about a shade of pink in a lower opacity. That way it won't show too much detail, but it'll fill negative space.

 

I like this. It's simple and get's the point across. Though, some of the edges look a bit pixely to me.

 

I definitely like V2 better than one, and I don't really see what you guys are complaining about the edges for, really. They look fine to me.

The only thing that confuses me here is the light. It seems to be hitting the cubes from somewhere around the upper left, but the background at the bottom is lighter than at the top (while the cube trails get darker).

It might just be me, lol.