My entry for SOTW. It was rushed since all my other entries were deleted from my flash drive somehow >_> CnC?
It looks very messy, although the horror feel is there. The render doesn't blend well with the background, making the focal look very choppy. Funny if it was a stock.
I believe the background could shout 'horror' more. The girl is great, though. I feel it there. But yes, sorta messy-ish background there. But it's still awesome 'cause yeah. xD
Ewwwww :o She looks gross, which in this case is good xD. Anyway; The right side of the background seem stuffed and messy while the left is more balanced. And the girl stands kind of out, maybe try making her flow a little more with the pic ?. Anyway, scary enough for me ;3
lol Like everyone said, it's pretty messy. The left side seems a bit empty though, like you put that little shining light thing on the right side, yet practicly nothing on the left. But the render's an awesome choice.
It seems like it was rushed, but that was my bad lol. Sorry about that.. It seems too worked on. Too much stuff going on. A bit less details and less vibrant colors. Try adding a gradient on it again. It'll help make the colors more lighter. Lower the opacity of some of the fx. Then your good man. GJ. Keep it up.
Thanks for the CnC everyone ^-^ Oh and btw, it was supposed to be messy because if you've played F.E.A.R. whenever Alma appears chaos usually happens so I was quickly trying to do that.
I know what you mean man. It's just it could've been done in more of a form and a sleeker way. It's a tag, not a game vid lol. But it is good dude. Better than my stuff lol.