Digital Art Hopefully this is better

ok, i tried again and took some advice, and i included the original pic so you cant say i just added text. :3. i dont think i did any better i think. please tell me.

original: http://i407.photobucket.com/albums/pp151/Kuma_Chan123/cecad3f5.jpg

mine:http://i407.photobucket.com/albums/pp151/Kuma_Chan123/cecad3f5-1.jpg

 

That is spam.

R~M What do you use, because this one still needs a lot of work as well D:

 

i just, you know, put the tint and focal and i dont know.

 

oh, duh, sorry, and again i like it, but Knuckles the Echidna is right it still needs some work

 

Look, I know you're just a noob but you have to grow out of that stage sometime, and I suggest now. Use capitilazation, correct spelling and punctuation, and give real critisism, not just "i like it :):):)"

So anyway, I think the render is good, but the color change and the dimensions are bleh. 3/10

Work on using cleaner, better effects.

 

what the heck is a render.... x_X XD

 

The picture that you used =/

 

you have a lot to learn in the graphics department >__>

i'm not trying to pick on you but the effects you've used on the picture are well.... to put it politely, they are not good. Try reading some tutorials on DA or something to get better. Do you use gimp?

 

Okay, let's see here.
-You inverted the picture which really makes your stock(Or render) look ugly as hell
-You added some wierdass circle thing which really does not fit in
-And you added some poorly placed text.

Harshness aside, you really need to work on your graphic ability. It's simply the fact that this would basically amount to work in MS-Paint.(I'm not saying that's what you used, but regardless, it appears that way.)
You really aught to check out some tutorials and such. And if you havent already, have a think about investing in adobe photoshop. If your budget is tight, have a look at GIMP or Paint.NET.

 

Read a tutorial and, if you haven't already, get GIMP or PS?
It is truly amazing how you get more cnc than I do.

 

how do i get gimp or PS???

 

well for PH (photoshop) you have to pay.

Gimp is free, and you just have to download it from the website.
http://www.gimp.org/

 

i cant download nothin, my computer is already messed up as it is... :(

 

Then stop trying until you get one of the said products.
Right now, you won't improve. Your stuff will always suck.

 

Eh, it's okay and all but really all you did was add affects and text. It's not a huge improvement but it's better then plain. I wouldn't really call it great but it's not bad.

 

thats messed up, someone gave me a bad rep cuz im stupid and cant make good graphic art. >_>

 

Report it to a mod?

 

how do i do that?