I made three versions of this,because i didnt know what color scheme to use.so CNC and tell me how i need to improve.and thats pretty much it. V1 V2 V3
I like this one, not your best though. I can't tell what the text is saying and either my compy is having screen issues or it's just that her chin is supposed to look smudged, I thought she was drooling a bit for a second xD
The only thing I can really say is that the lighting looks washed out, I would try to a graident map, or a warming filter and set to softlight. And also since the text is behind the render/stock, bring it to front and play with the blending, like setting it to overlay and play with positioning. Other than that, looks good.
