Digital Art Hey, look, a crappy deep dive tag.

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Cody, Oct 6, 2007.

  1. Cody Chaser

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  2. Hissora ahurhurhur.

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    Ehh, it's not crappy, but not amazing either.

    The signature has a nice flow around the stock but everywhere else it's blocky.

    I don't really agree with the text all that much, either. The text seems to either be too small or the font you used doesn't work with it well.

    Good Job, otherwise.
     
  3. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    Excellent, but you could do an apply image and put it to soft light, that will add more depth to the light source, and if is too dark, duplicate it and put the duplicate to screen, you decide the opacity, and if is too colorful add image again and run a B&W gradient map and left it at color or normal, like before, you decide the opacity.
     
  4. cronoking Chaser

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    I really like this one. It's a nice change from your old signatures which I actually dont like so much xD. I like how the light source looks like it's coming from a small opening at the top like they're underground or something. Everything has a nice feel to it in the signature. I dont know about that text though, I didnt even notice it my first time looking at it xD. It feels like it's missing something though, I'll probably remember later. Other than that it's a good signature.

    Overall I say a 8.5/10. Deep dive Woooooo~
     
  5. darkslayer Twilight Town Denizen

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    Not a bad signuture. I like it but what does the text say?
     
  6. Cody Chaser

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    It says dive^

    ;-;
     
  7. cronoking Chaser

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    xD Sorry, but to me they looked more like over crowded random bits and pieces spread over the render x3

    http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u10/Tahg-ster/Soravertcopy.png
    http://tn3-1.deviantart.com/fs17/300W/f/2007/200/a/1/Distort_Reality_by_XxTheXChaosxX.png
    http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u10/Tahg-ster/Antmancopy.png
    http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u10/Tahg-ster/Finishthefightcopy.png
    http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u10/Tahg-ster/EScopy.png
    http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u10/Tahg-ster/Goofy2.png

    See what I mean? They arent all like that but it's used alot. But you're still awesome DJ ;D *glomps*

    And to make this not spammy.......put more black around the edges and add some foregrounds effects. xD
     
  8. Hakurei Reimu Take my hand. And then I'll fly with you right up

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    That looks pretty good from wat I can c...
     
  9. Cody Chaser

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    |< I'm upset with that text, DJ. It bothers me that it's so boldish and semi randomly placed inconspicuously.

    lol ok, but it has mucho potential. If you jazzed it up more, I bet it'd look more appealing. But it's still pretty and the stocke is A grade. 8B
     
  11. Cocohints "Up to now, the most discussed topic is global war

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    Sadly, I don't have any advice for you that hasn't been shared already. I can only say that the foggy mood really suits the Deep Dive theme, it adds to the mystique of TWTNW. I also like the colour theme used, the darkness and the light that isn't PURE WHITE but just enough light to get the point across.
     
  12. SplitOverload Chaser

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    Not your worst. Not your best. But verry good.

    Well first of all the text is bad. I'm pretty sure you know that lawl. Try changing that. The render looks all foggy and all blurred on overlay xD. It should be a bit more sharper to match the rest of the flow in the tag. The dark spots on the right can be a bit more expanded, making it from a dark to rise type. That'll look pretty hawt. Tbh, tags like this should be bigger. They need more expansion lawl. The border isn't a that good. Change it to 1px black or no border at all.

    Otherwise, better than some of your tags. A new look I can kinda' see. GJ.

    p.S; DJ, how can you get such replies on a thread? Tell me how you get pplez to reply to your topics nao.