Here I stand

Holy Crap! I havent been here in so long. been so busy makin up Gfx that I completely forgot about this section! Anyways, I'm gettin back into my poetry, cnc...if you want:

Here I Stand

Here I stand
With despair, pain
Running through my veins
Tears rolling down my face

Its Unbearable!
What I feel now
I know you're holding on
I'm waiting 'till you're gone

Here I stand
Waiting in darkness
For that shadow I'll see
Standing in front of me

Here I stand
Waiting for your hand
To take me to a place
And reassure that i'm safe

Here I stand
I'm waiting for you...

Note: little thing off the top of my head, srsly. I just got back into writing, so for the moment it might look like crap

 

Not that bad actually xD

 

Awesome! Care to elaborate on that???

 

Sure, the first verse sort-of takes me away because I've been in a situation like that before and it was unbearable and I felt like I was in darkness.

Hope that's what you meant by elaborate.​

 

I like it! You really express emotions in the poem.

 

Pretty good, I'd say.

 

I agree with Emmet.