I have an emergency! I need some help My friend is dying She's injured badly Why won't anyone awnser My call for help? I can't stop the bleeding I can't save her I'm going to lose her If someone doesn't help me Please someone help I don't want her to go She's the only one who cared The only one who tried to help me But If I lose her now What will I do then? I can't afford to waste time She won't make it to a hospital She'll die before then Somebody please help! She needs treatment right away Because she took the wrong path She got injured and now She's dying Thank you, sir, for helping me But I'm afraid it's too late Because nobody awnsered my call She's already dead... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ wow... not one of my happiest poems...
Well that deffinatly wasnt one of the more cherry poems Ive ever read. I like how you emphiesed some words such as "death" and "help". It really adds to the poem. Good work.
