Digital Art HELP!!! Trying self portrait... bad results :(

Ive been trying self portraiting and I dont like how it ends up. I wanna keep the style, but I want some critique so I can *try* and fix it. Thank you all! It is an SVG (vector) by the way :D. oh also Im using inkscape not illustrator (hardcore linux user)

 

Sorry for the double post but... Seriously not even one reply?

 

Well, the thing is that the graphic art section is pretty dead. I'm not familiar with vector images, so I can't really say, other than it leaves many details to be desired.

Such as depth, and shadowing, ect.

 

Yeah, even for a vector this a bit too flat. Still, it's good for just learning. And just to ask, how do you like Inkscape? I've tried it before but for whatever reason I just couldn't figure it out.

Try practicing with cell shading. It's very popular with vector art. You've got a nice base here, you just have to play with details.