Help on short song! T^T

Discussion in 'Archives' started by Garxena, Dec 21, 2008.

  1. Garxena Hollow Bastion Committee

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    I can't belive it, but I'm stuck!! T^T This is a Christmas present in it's final stages, and I need some help finishing this song!

    "Through fire and flames
    Through the darkest of your days
    I’ll be there with you
    I will help you through
    All that you can’t do
    ‘Cause you’re not alone
    You’ve got us as a home

    We’re friends to the end
    No matter what’s around the bend"

    The rhyme pattern is aa,bbb,cc, dd, eee, ff. I'm okay with slant rhymes. If anyone can help, please do! I just need 5 more lines; you don't have to necissarily write them, ideas are good too, I just need some help.

    Thankies,
    Riku_Gaara
     
  2. Chevalier Crystal Princess

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    Together we can cross this brigde
    through it's marrows and it's ways.
    We can make a breakthrough
    Breaking a new path for you.

    sorry, couldn't think of anything else.
     
  3. Garxena Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Thank you!!! :glomp: And with several hours to spare! Now I can get this gift done!