Hell on Earth

Jin opened her eyes and stared at the cieling."Whats going on?"jin said.

 

raxtion came in "jin can we talk?" he asked her

 

Jin sat up."Oh yeah!" she said and patted the bed beside her."Sit down." she said smiling.

 

raxtion disliked her good attitude becuase that meant he was going to feel REALLY bad about himself. raxtion was silent

 

Jen expression changed.She stood up."Whats wrong?" Jin said in a concerned tone."Raxtion please tell me."

 

"do it" the devil wispered in his ear

"i-" raxtion didn't want to say it but he had to "i think that lately you have been acting very b-"

"do it" the devil wispered agian

"b***hy" siad raxtion feeling his heart sink below that of which it has never gone

 

Her eyes went wide.She backed up."Raxtion....." she whispered and ran out crying."GET OUT!" she screamed."Just go now leave LEAVE!" she said slamming the door and running outside.She headed to the park,

 

"good boy" siad the devil

"THAT'S IT!!!!!!!!!!" raxtion punched the devil in the face

the devil didn't even flinch he just started luaghing then he grabed raxtion by the hiar and threw him agianst a wall "don't mess with me boy" then he dissappeared

 

Jin ran to the park and sat on the swing."I DIdN'T DESERVE THIS!" she screamed to herself and fell off the swing and on her knees."I can't fix this I can't." she said continuing to cry.

 

there was nothing raxtion could do to stop her pian... becuase he cuased it and he feelt horrible about it

 

"I can end it now."Jin said wiping her eyes.She looked up."This pain can be gone."she said."Zidane im sorry." she said.

 

"do it" whispered the devil to jin "it's the only way to stop the pian"

 

Jin looked at it."Who are you." she said standing up.

OOC:Can you give me a link to the song-teardrops of my guitar by taylor swift.My itunes isn't working.

 

"i am your friend..." siad the devil

ooc: sure

http://www.esnips.com/doc/305b56c5-0595-4b6c-98da-475dd30abba4/Taylor-Swift---Tear-Drops-On-My-Guit

 

OOC: Tanks you!

"Ummm..." Jin said looking at her feet."Everyone...why are they treating me like this.Raxtion,he he...."Jin said as tears fell from her eyes again.

 

"mean..." siad the devil finishing her sentence "they are all acting this way becuase they are jelouse of you... becuase they want what you have."

 

"But raxtion he will never do this."she said backing up."I'm just under pressure thats all."she said trying to reassure herself."I have to go and ask whats wrong." she said smiling.Even though she was smiling.She felt her heart ripping each second.

OOC: Hey i gtg school is tomorrow and we have benchmarks ^^ bye

 

"don't trust him jin..." siad the devil "he will only decive you and get what he want's"

ooc: see ya and good luck :)

 

OOC:My mom said i can stay up awhile ^^

"Yeah you must be right."she said returning."Im so confused..."she said before fainting.Her body laid on the dirt in the park.

 

the devil picked her up and brought her to a cliff "to bad that raxtion did this to you" the devil snaped his finger's and all the object's around him had raxtion's finger print's and stuff on them "now why would raxtion throw you off a cliff?" siad the devil getting ready to drop jin

ooc: WOOT!!!!!!!