Heartless

I am heartless, I am cold
I feel nothing, my heart is frozen
I don´t care for you
Nor nobody will do

I just want to cry
But I know I can´t
I don´t want to be weak
I don´t want to feel

I don´t feel happiness
I don´t believe in love
I don´t trust in anyone
Nor I will trust in you

Sadness, depression
Wrath, destruction
There is no happiness
Just wrath and sadness

I am cold, I am heartless
I don´t feel, I am careless
I am alone, in this world
And I will never love

Another sad poem, basically I express what I feel or what I felt.

 

That was.....Depressing.

 

I know, I am bad at poems, you were saying depressing of boredom, right?

 

No. It's noit a bad poem. It's really good. But it's just depressing.

 

Depressing as a bad thing: When you're trying to write a happy poem.

I hope that was not a happy poem.

That was sad . . . I wanted to hide in a corner.

(That's a good compliment.)
And, you're good at poetry.

But, a hint I learned in Creative Writing class- Isolate your imagry. Use less words.
(I'm bad at this too.)


"I am heartless, I am cold
I feel nothing, my heart is frozen
I don´t care for you
Nor nobody will do"
or . . .
"I am heartless, cold.
Numb, frozen
Apathetic,
isn't everyone?"

Or something like that.
Condense your words or something.

Yeah.

Good though.

 

No, it was a sad poem, I maded it in less than 5 minutes, I use my emotional states, and thanks for the help.