I'm starting a fan-fic about an alter-ego called "The White Rider". Here's a summary. A girl named Eden, who has black-brown hair, brown eyes, and slightly tan skin. She was good at archery. One day, a man from a black cloak comes and pursuades her to join his Orginization. She refuses and follows him to other worlds, wearing a white cloak. She goes to the first world she was hoping to end up, The Olympus Collisuem. She buys a horse that she names Snow, for the horse was snow-white. She then goes to China to find whom she wanted to meet, Sora. That's what I just made up now. I am going to do my best with what I have now. I hope the first chapter will please you all. EDIT: Sorry that I spelled "Read" wrong.... This is my first fan-fic.
Well.... I didn't really start the fan-fic.... I just made this up as I went.... I think the guy from the Orginization was interested in her Archaery skills.... I don't know... I'm just starting this. When I finish the first chapter, I'll post a new thread about it. EDIT: I'm just thinking about what to do... I don't even know what world she's gonna live in. I'm gonna try my best and hopfully I'll make it through.
Okay, okay, don't get stressed about it... XD; It's just a story, and, seeing that it's your first one an' all, I'll make sure to give ya lots of critisism and encouragement! ^-^ Cuz everybody needs a little of both... Can't wait to see it! =D P.S., This is just a little tip that you don't need to pay any attention to, but, for your first fanfic, ya might wanna start a bit smaller... But that's just me cuz I'mma ******. XD;
and we all have nervous breakdowns sometimes.*holding a crammed folder filled with paper*I wonder If I should....*looks at folder*Maybe Later.
I wish you good luck. I really hope you fare better than me. For two months my first fanfic turned my life into hell. On that note "learn to kill your children." One thing I'd ditch is the horse thing no offense but adding in another living creature just seems to be hard to deal with. But, what do I know, seriously I'm a raving lunatic with three exams left that I should really be studying for right now.
But it would be a pain if she had to walk in the mountains on foot! I just thought a horseback riding archer was a good idea.... Orginization XIII just popped out of nowhere.
.................................................................................................................................. I'm just trying to be positive........ and you killed it.........
I finished a story that has 76 Chapters.2 two-part specials,1 18 part special,and 1 unfinished special.and I'm working on a story that already has 4 chapters and 1 7-part special.I got too much time on my hands.
Oh... I'm sorry that was serious not sarcasm. I was actually being like happy... Now you made me feel bad. Thanks a lot! (This time that last bit was sarcastic.)
