Traditional Art Haruhi drawing (really bored)

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Okay, i finished drawing this sometime ago. The first version of this i outlined in pen and then erased, but it came out all wrong...
I didn't draw this free hand, i used an acutal outline-style thing. I know i made her a little long waisted and her legs are short, so please don't tell me that in what i did wrong. I added some shading at the end, so here it is....

 

Hmm...okay I won't mention that then. :3

First, it looks like her face doesn't have any eyebrows. And her eyes look droopy.
D:
Her mouth is to much off the side, and she has no ears. You should give her more of a chin also. I like the bottom of her hair, but I think the top of her head should be more circlish.
Her arms are to skinny, and I can't see much of her hand.
One of her boobs are WAY bigger then the other. Her right side, is just way to flat.
I like her legs but her skirt needs more detail. She looks like she's floating :3
Try to make it look like her feet are on the ground.​

 

Thanks for the criticizim. I'll remeber that when i atempt to draw her again. The shoe thing is something that keeps continuing. That and the hands i suck at.

 

Yeah, what Skittles has mentioned..

but I like how it turned out :3 It's a good drawing all in all <3
Especially her hair, though her bangs look kind of funny - but hey you could always fix that~
Proportion's kind of off but that can be worked on with no problem!
And I know you'll get the hands done well in no time! Just a little more practice and then poof! A perfect hand! 8D

Still a great drawing though, Tummer. =]

 

Thanks for the advice.

 

I don't think it's very good. The body proportion is all off and it looks too 2 dimensional. Work on the original structure, then add detail.