Traditional Art Haruhi Attempt 2

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Okay so i drew haruhi again, because out of the epicness of bordum. If you wondering why i drew a lemon, it was on the cover of the DVD. Please don't point out that i drew her legs kinda short again; and also don't post what anyone else posts wrong with it. That get's really annoying...

 

I actually think this is worse than your last one. This one has shadowing, but it looks even flatter and still 2 dimensional. The hair looks fine, but the rest of the head looks way off. It just looks deformed somewhat.