Traditional Art Halloween Town Kairi

I drew this when I was bored a few hours ago by the pool...

Its halloween town Kairi, based of how she looked in the first game. SHes a witch ( I think )

I have a close up of the face and then the whole picture.

CnC please!!!

http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x287/AerithRoses/Kairi.jpg

http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x287/AerithRoses/Kairiface.jpg

 

I love how kairi looks, here in her witch costume. It's cute,

 

Sorry... that kinda sucks...

 

What part about it? It would help it you elaborated more

 

Here´s my opinion,just so you know Im trying to help you:

it needs alot of work.
Especially the arms.
Also her hands looks a lil weird and it doesnt really look like shes holding the broom.
But I like the idea of Halloween Town Kairi so I say you were creative.
You need to practice and you'll get better in no time.

 

Thats for the comment. It also really helps that you explained what was wrong so that I can work on it. Ive always had problems with hands, so I know I need to work on those.

Thanks for criticism!