Traditional Art Half Werewolf Drawing :D (BETTER THAN THE LAST)

I know I have to work on the neck, the eyes, and the hair a bit, but this is what I got so far :D

cnC please
I'm still working on it, and I need some ideas :D

 

that is way way way way way way better than before

 

See?that's a little bit better now but one thing that kind of bothers me:

Her shoulders are awfully too wide and big, naturally , female shoulders are tiny and thin so it makes the girl look manly x:
I like the eyes,they're just right to my eyes so nicely done with drawing them.
Keep practicing c:

 

Okay, I'll work on that :)

 

yesh better now but i still think it could use a little work :D i think if u put motre effort into it u should get a really great drawing!

 

The face looks fine, but the shoulders are too stiff and straight- they should slope downwards. They're also too wide like Tootsie said. It would help to find a tutorial or referance of basic body shapes and such to follow as you draw the body.

 

Cocohints gave me a link on one of my drawings, and thats where I learned to draw the face at. I'll look at the female body ones too ;)

 

If you need some links, here are a few I found :
http://taylor-the-weird.deviantart.com/art/Anime-Female-Body-Tutorial-23294775
http://beckiebootwo.deviantart.com/art/Female-Anatomy-5223255

 

This is high quality drawing with a realistic looking chest and i enjoy the hair but the ears look more elfish than werewolfy to me if you want me to be honest with you. Just make the ears look more doggish and it'd be much better.