Haiku

Discussion in 'Archives' started by Beau, Mar 27, 2010.

  1. Beau Hollow Bastion Committee

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    I wrote a Haiku, hope you like! :)

    Happiness turns bad,
    All hope crumbles into dust
    Only faith can stand....

    Sort of depressing, I know...
     
    Beau, Mar 27, 2010
    Beau, Mar 27, 2010
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  2. Juicy Chaser

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    It is rather depressing. xD

    It was a good haiku though, simple like all poems of the kind, but a good choice of words. Hope you post more. o:
     
    Juicy, Mar 28, 2010
    Juicy, Mar 28, 2010
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  3. 9Kairi9hearts Twilight Town Denizen

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    I liked it, but were you posting a thread for people to make Haikus on, or just for your haikus?
     
    9Kairi9hearts, Apr 11, 2010
    9Kairi9hearts, Apr 11, 2010
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