This is the prologue for the manga/book that me and my friends are making. If your wondering about the name, its the first letter of each of our names: Hanna Alex(me) Afi Lamont Troy that makes HAALT, WOOO! Prologue: Din's Prophecy The world of Raion, a blissful world, bathed in sunshine and happiness. But even in this world, a darkness lingers, and the people are beginning to fear for their lives. An evil entite know as Notlimah became the worry of the three kingdoms of Raion: The Kingdom of The Red Blood Rose, The Kingdom of The White Life Rose,a and The Kingdom of The Golden Gilded Rose. They inevitably joined together and forged a vast army, with which they hoped to defeat Notlimah, as vein a hope as it was, it was there only shot. They sent the army to the White Shadow Fortress, Notlimah's base. In one night,the army was slain, leaving only two men alive to tell the tale. "It was a great arachnid, bearing the mask of an Oni!" one of the men said aghast the other man told the kings on his deathbed: "It has a kind of magic..that doesn't belong in this world...." The Kings thought the worst, so in one final effort to stop Notlimah, they went to the Oracle of The Altars: Din The Benevolent. "When the worst seems to loom over all, Five Warriors will come and defeat Notlimah..." "How will we know who the Warriors are?" one of the kings asked "The warrior will each bear a crystal shard, one that corresponds with the each of the Five Altars that are scatter around the land...They shall purify the Shards at the Altars, and only them, will they be able to destroy Notlimah." The kings thought that the Prophecy would mean safety for their kingdoms, but they were gravely mistaken, Notlimah knew of the Prophecy, as thus made Five incarnations of herself, each to corrupt one Altar, and take its power for itself. Without the Altars, the bountiful gifts they offered were washed away by darkness. Fires faded away in seconds, The winds died out, The seas raged, The earth began to rot, and night and day became one. The Kings waited patiently for the Warriors, and Notlimah planed her conquest and the world of Raion became a worse place by the day....................... The warriors Would Not Come By Themselves, It Would Take Notlimah To Bring Her Destroyers To Raion.... "Are you SURE it wasn't a porno?" Alex said taking a bite of his toast , ever since the school gave free breakfast, the group ate in the cafeteria each morning. "Just because the movie was called Hard Candy doesn't mean that its a porno!" Hanna snapped at Alex and glared at Lamont and Troy as soon as they gave even the slightest chuckle. "Just finish the story." Afi said, eating another spoonful of cereal. "well, theres this girl, and she meets a guy on the internet, and he's in his thirties, but she's fourteen." "I've seen this one before!" Alex said with his mouth full "At the end the chick cuts the guy' nuts off." He said as Lamont, Troy and Afi went into an uproar of laughter. Hanna decided to laugh as well, as they finished up breakfast and headed to P.E.
It seems really well written and thought out. The beginning makes it sound sound really serious, but the dialogue made it sound humorous. xD Would love to see the rest.
