Traditional Art Guilty Gear sketch - MAJOR need of CnC plzkthx

As the title says, this is a sketch I made last night of the innocent gear Dizzy from Guilty Gear games. Only in this version she is not at all innocent, but the evil "alter ego". If you think Dark Link you are close enough.

DeviantArt link.



And those aren't nipples. It's some metal things attached to her outfit I dunno, ask the game creator.

Fellow friends/GG fans told me to finish it naow, but before I start inking it I want some critique if you see things that can be changed. Once it's inked there's no turning back.

GIMME.

 

^^ I really love this sketch.. The midsection of the mody looks perfect, and i love the way the eyes are ^^ <3

99.99999999/100 ^^

I put it on paint and i had 2 suggestions ^^




I find that the left part of the wing should be a little more 'puffier' towards the top...

and maybe the right knee a little more downwards. ^^ It might look a little better downward, but the placement it is in looks good too ^^

 

<3

Thank you for pointing out the knee problem, I would have never spotted it. *adds to list*

Don't you worry, I'll add more to the wing. Those were more rushed compared to the body. :3

 

HOLY FU*K AIGJOIRGFPGUJ!!! DDD8
*big slap on back* <3333333
THIS IS EFFIN' BEAUTIFUL!!! *tear*

Oh, what can I say about this . . . well I think I'm in love with her expression. Soooo ev-v-v-il, and devious! It's SHMEXY! Is she licking blood off her finger? 8O That's even shmexier! Her eyes are AH-MAY-FU*KING-ZING. xD Okey, her hair is perfect . . . there's volume and there's flow, can't really say anything about that. He shoulders are slender and beautiful . . . also powerful. Ah, her breasts are like domes, [and though I don't like that], it cannot be helped, considering this is an animé character, and almost every animé character has balloon shaped breasts, and nipples!! LOLOLOL. JK, I sort of know what those metal thingies are for, and it still pertains to her nipples. Your 3D perspective is also flawless here, as I really cannot find anything wrong with it, even with the scratch shading. I ♥ her abs, and her costume too. And I do agree with Cupcake about the knee thing, just bring it down slightly, and that should do it. Aside from all of that, the only problem I'm seeing is with her hands . . . her hinds seem small, in comparison to her entire being. For the hand resting on her hip, I'd suggest that you make it a little longer and maybe slightly bigger. And the hand she is licking, do make that a little bigger, I say by 3%. Your wings are unfinished, so I can't really comment on that, but I do look forward to this being inked. ^_^- Ohh! You've put a lot of work into this piccy, and I want to see the completed version of it, hun! Good luck!

 

Woo,you posted it <3

Anyway,Cupcake kind of pointed out most of the wrong spots and all that shiz and I insist you color it :'3

It would look amazing in my opinion,keep up the good work X3

 

Coco >.< You are like my drawing idol :P
I really like this one, though I havent seen much of your work. You have a very nice style, and the sketch is absoulty wonderful, except for those thing Cuppy Kitty spotted out ;P
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<3 <3 <3 <3 <3

Yup.... >:3 I was thinking it'd add more to the sadistic side. Heaven knows she'd be capable of it!

I know lol.. I blame the designer, it's a guy with an... interesting style for his ideas.. You should see I-No, heh..

THANK YOU!! I knew there was something that was bugging me about it!! I guess it's easy to lose perspective when you sit with a project for too long. That's what CnCing is for! ^^

I highly appreciate your help guys - this place seems to be the only one taking cnc serious.