well you do know that dose....means a dose of something not like "dos" wich means two. anyways, the first one feels bland or like a multicolor thoothpaste. i would go for the second one too.
I dunno Spanish. >_> I'll fix that. Anyway, it was a stupid piece of crap I randomly came up with. Un-intentional.
lol, I thought u meant 12 when u wrote doce cuz that's how u spell it in Spanish. XD Anyways, the first one looks kinda bland compared with the 2nd. The stocks are ok but I like the 2nd one a lot more. Color variation and everything blends in well and looks really nice. 2nd ftw.
Fix the text in the second. It doesn't match at all. Also, you could try and make the pentooling interact with the text, if that makes sense to you.
I prefer what you have going for #2, but the font doesn't match. Use some sort of render or stock, and you need something to give it life and not just bleh.
I like toothpaste..sorry that's spam I really like the colors, I'd use it if it didn't say Catch The Rain...
*glompy hug* Thanking you dear <3 both are pretty, and I shall take them both =P I love the simplicity of the first one, it's cute xD and the second one has a delicious background <3 Thanks