Definitely not done. I can tell you're putting some filters over the stock's hair: I would definitely try not to do that. The C4D usage isn't bad, though. Effects are pretty nice. I'd probably create more depth in the \ direction, personally, with some other C4D's and/or filters of choice. Text is most ideal near the upper-right (in perspective of the stock) area of the stock's head, imo. A nice white & beige(sp?) color for stock & other things with it (like lines/small text, etc). Oh, and brighten up the light. >| It's still a midtone. EDIT: Shat. That yellow thing to the right of the stock is really odd. Fix it plz
