Freedom...

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  1. Catch the Rain As the world falls down ♥

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    ...I ****ing HATE writer's block -__- thanks to W7FHAX for making me realise I need to get off my *** and carry on writing xD

    anywayz enjoy ^^ I hopes

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    So she will go down fighting
    Because she is tired of crying
    and she knows that tears lead to nothing
    Another dream shattered,
    Broken like her reflection,

    But she wont be beaten;
    She wil piece the fragments back together,
    Mend her broken heart
    She is tired of always crying
    She is tired of falling apart

    She holds her head high
    She walks looking forward
    She never says goodbye
    And she leaves him behind
    Leaves him lost in a past that she longs to escape

    Trapped for so long
    Held by fear
    Always wanting freedom
    Far away from here
    She closes her eyes
    She forces a smile
    She knows thats shes safe

    She will go down fighting
    She is stronger than they know
    She will survive through this
    She is letting her past go
    Freedom awaits
     
  2. Rosey Chaser

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    Dis is beautiful darling, beautiful. ^0^

    Great description, and it made me think alot.

    Rosey luvs it <3
     
  3. Catch the Rain As the world falls down ♥

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    lol thanks :)

    It was easy once I STARTED writing, but it was finding an inspiration that was the hard part this time :sweatdrop:

    *hugs* thanks :)
     
  4. W7F King's Apprentice

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    :D I luvz it! Nice job. *wishes could rep* Very descriptive, and something that I, a while ago, could relate to. Well, if you took all of the she's outta there, o' course. xD
     
  5. Catch the Rain As the world falls down ♥

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    xD thanks *hugs*

    I am glad you liked it :)
     
  6. Lord Knight Xiron Hollow Bastion Committee

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    I know how you feel.

    Nice job!
     
  7. Catch the Rain As the world falls down ♥

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    Thanks ^^ *hugs* I know lol writers block blows hard! -___-
     
  8. Shuhbooty moon child

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    Awwww! It's beautiful! TT.TT
    Well writen, I love it. It made me think about alot of things. And it's sad. TT.TT
    Great job CtR, I love it! <333
     
  9. Catch the Rain As the world falls down ♥

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    *hugs* I was wanting to ask you to have a look at it ^^ I am really glad you liked it :)


    :glomp: thank you lots :)
     
  10. Trigger hewwo uwu

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    Jeez, Kay, you're a really good writer. n.n

    It's awesome. ^^
     
  11. exile0025 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    it sounds nice.
    my head is about think as purple heart(thats a type of wood)can you explane it to me?