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Discussion in 'Archives' started by Garxena, Dec 31, 2007.

  1. Garxena Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Here's the deal. He's a junior, I'm a freshman. He's on the football team, I'm in the Musical Theater Productions class. He's a star, I'm nothing. So we hooked up. But... he's not the nicest guy. I can't say anything to anyone. If I do... well... Anyways, I wrote this poem to kinda let out my feelings.

    Hold me and tell me
    You'll never leave me
    Don't let go of me
    I don't want to be alone anymore
    The darkness used to scare me
    But if it's what you are
    If it will get me to be accepted
    I'll go with it
    I'll do anything to have someone like you
    Harsh
    Single purposed
    But you never let harm come to me
    Unless it's by your own hand
    You're rough
    You don't listen
    I'll show you the bruises
    Will you quit?
    For me?
    Or is it me that has to leave?
    If I do
    Will you come after me?
    Or will you just get another girl to abuse?
     
  2. Heaven's Angel Kingdom Keeper

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    omg... *hugs* u really need to tell somebody... if I'm understanding this right... dump him... find a way to get away from him... those aren't the kind f people you should be hanging out with...


    as for the poem itself... good length... not a good atmosphere in my opinion... but overall good job ^^
     
  3. Rosey Chaser

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    1. If hes abusing you I want you to get the crap out of that relationship right now and tell your parents/teacher/guardian/someone you can trust :3

    2. Its a very beautifully written poem. I can really feel the emotion put into it, and it shows.

    3. If hes abusing you I want you to get the crap out of that relationship right now and tell your parents/teacher/guardian/someone you can trust >_> >_> >_> (Yes I know 1 is the same as 3)
     
  4. Clawtooth Keelah se'lai!

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    very powerful. If this means what I think it means then call the police or SOMEONE. Don't leave it.
     
  5. Garxena Hollow Bastion Committee

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    i know that i have to get out of the relationship but i'm scared that if I do try to he'll just go ballistic. i want to tell someone but if he found out it was me who ratted him out.... i'm just really scared....