I wrote another poem Hoping for forgiveness, Begging on my knees. God give him back, Oh please. You took him before his time, I know it's all beacause of me. But I'll promise I'll shape up, Just you wait and see! I know that I've been bad; I know I've ticked you off. But you took it out on him, So from my team: You're off!
Thx. Jake was hit by a car:cryinganime:. I often don't talk about him, but a poem just came to my head.
Whoa. Now I've heard of sad stories and poems and stuff but WOW! This Jake person really meant a lot 2 u.:(
spelling error with because, but the last line...doesn't entire match the rest of the poem. You are mourning the loss of your friend but then out of the blue comes a sports reference and ends with either, distain or annoyance. Is this what you were going for?
