Like Kissing Cherry Blossoms This distance, we both know it's damned. I want to entangle my fingers with yours; the blossoms landing on our fluent hair. May sound perverse to those, but it seems they don't concieve that much. Our amorous kisses cannot stop connecting, Please don't stop this nirvanic significance. Then again, not like it'll ever end. Flowers drop on our clothing, and our hands. Both of us hiding under the shade of the violet, and the sun. Reality doesn't exist, within the embrace of yourself. Oh, Ms. Lovely, it's impossible to relate anything within existence. I find myself going beyond the limitation, loving you until my heart beats violently. It may sound terrible, but the warmth is indescriable. Nothing, is what's compared to the cherry blossom connections. Life, feels like forever when in the perfect circle of your hold. Your words, your voice, it seduces me to the point of speechless indefinibility. No angel, they are predictable as ever, when compared to your being. I love you, forever. Until death, and even afterlife.
omg.....i probably shouldnt ask. anyways......i think it needs more flow. but your choice of words is nice. and i can.....(call me crazy) grasp.the feelings this is trying to convey. you seem....to be very....passionate.....
I agree the flow is off. Try using less 'big words' so it flows better. But still the description is lovely, very beautiful. A cherry blossom was a perfect addition to the title. Guessing it was for someone special. If you give it to thme, I hope they like it! ^^
