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  1. Devil's Angel Gummi Ship Junkie

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    She is the beautiful flower
    The one surrounded by weeds
    I picked her up
    I showed her affection
    I cared before she died

    My tears were her water
    Her stem was my support
    My hug is her warmth
    Her petals were my light
    The scent was our love

    Then I turned and saw her
    My love smiling
    She made me real again
    She was my flower I'm her sun
    Everything has to end

    The sun went out
    The flower faded
    The clouds cried
    We stood there
    Holding each other

    My eyes set upon yours
    Those eyes are my stars
    I wish I wish I wish
    That we will love each other forever
    We will stay on the ground
    Never to go to heaven nor hell

    We were blown away
    We left 'together'
    You are my flower


    The first peom I ever made that was in a guy's point of view

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  2. *Hippie Jesus* "I get online and notice I have E-mail I click my

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    ......have u ever try entering in any poem contests?? serisouly that is a really good poem it's perfectly insync
     
  3. Devil's Angel Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Oh no :sweatdrop: yea they always end before I get an inspiration
     
  4. *Hippie Jesus* "I get online and notice I have E-mail I click my

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    well i can say i can't write a poem fo shiz
     
  5. Devil's Angel Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Poems I use to just express whats on my mind ^^ and thank you for the comment
     
  6. *Hippie Jesus* "I get online and notice I have E-mail I click my

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    your very welcome and when i express it turns out "badly" just leave it at that
     
  7. Devil's Angel Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Oh ok? good luck with that lol
     
  8. Heaven's Angel Kingdom Keeper

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    so that's what was on your mind...? >_>

    well I love it and I think it's beautiful... *hugs* :3
     
  9. Devil's Angel Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Yup you and chase were on my mind ^^ Thanks and hope your relationship last
     
  10. Heaven's Angel Kingdom Keeper

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    aww... thanks :3 *hugs again*
     
  11. Devil's Angel Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Im serious I hope you do ^^ becuz he should treat u well he isn't like the other guys.If he does hurt you omg he has to go through me jessica and bailey so i hope it works out.I dedicate this to you the sweet flower lol
     
  12. Heaven's Angel Kingdom Keeper

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    lol... *hug joo again cuz u deserve it* seriously... this is like my favorite poem now... I lub joo <3 :)
     
  13. Devil's Angel Gummi Ship Junkie

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    lol you should that took a lot a concentration.So hard to act like guy in love
     
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  15. Heaven's Angel Kingdom Keeper

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    :glomp: :D

    I still <3 this poem... :P lol it really must be difficult to write something like this... acting as someone other than yourself is NOT easy... trust me... I've tried ;D
     
  16. Devil's Angel Gummi Ship Junkie

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    :D I know u have to have an opnion like a guy