Flavor of the Week

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  1. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    This is the one-shot I talked about awhile ago. It's for all you sea-salt ice cream whores out there. This story is about ice cream, luv, and trying to new things. XD I broke it down into two parts here is the first part. The second part is now up!

    Catergory: crack-tastic
    Rating: Well... I guess PG-13
    Ice cream, ice cream, ice cream, ice cream, ice cream, ice cream, ice cream, ice cream, ice cream, ice cream, ice cream, ice cream, ice cream, ice cream, ice cream, ice cream, ice cream, ice cream. X3

    Dedicated to the biggest sea-salt ice cream fan: StupidAquarius
    >:3

    Enjoy this tasty story!
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    The boy watched as a slender girl with blonde hair entered the park. She had a glow as she walked and a smile on her face as she seated herself on a bench. The girl happily ate the ice cream come in her hand, as it slowly melted in the warm summer sun. The bright sun bathed her in its warmth and complimented her beauty.

    The boy stood and exited his spot beneath the shady tree. He stepped into the sun and his sandy-blonde hair glistened in its rays. He slowly approached the girl. “Hey Namine,” he said smiling. The girl lifted her head up and greeted the boy with her sparkling blue eyes. “Hi Roxas,” she said happily still munching on her ice cream.

    He took a seat on the bench next the girl and inched closer gradually. “Can I have a taste?” Roxas asked. Namine looked at him somewhat confused. “Sure. It’s great that you’re finally trying a new flavor!” she said happily holding up her ice cream to him. “I wasn’t talking about that,” Roxas said slyly. He shoved the ice cream cone away and brought his face only inches away from Namines. “I was talking about you,” he whispered, then embraced her in a passionate kiss.

    Namine taking a back and was giggling, pushed Roxas away. “Stop, people are staring,” she said as she shoved him playfully. “Well if they don’t like it they can leave,” he said tickling her. “Well, you ruined,” Namine said between giggles, “my ice cream cone.” “Oh well, it was a nasty flavor anyway,” Roxas said looking at the cone plopped on the ground melting.

    “No it wasn’t. You just think that, because all you eat is sea-salt ice cream!” Namine retorted. “That’s because sea-salt is the only good flavor. Besides I’ll just buy you another cone tonight,” Roxas said sarcastically. “Fine, but you still owe me,” Namine said crossing her arms. “Okay, I guess. What do I owe you then? Can it be paid back in kisses?” he teased.

    “No, silly. You have to try the mystery flavor of the week,” she said flipping her hair slightly. “Eww, never! Isn’t there anything else?” he refused. “Aw, please. Do it for me?” Namine said sticking out her lower lip. “Err….” he debated, “I’m only going to because of you. I guess I have to then.” he sighed giving in. “Great,” Namine said giving him a light peck on the cheek, “See you tonight!” she yelled running off.


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    The ice cream parlor was well-known. Everyone went there on a regular basis; more teens hung-put there when there was nothing to do. It was a quaint little parlor; with a bar, orderly booths, and little tables with umbrellas outside on the patio. Anyone could dine on a variety of things from: hot dogs, a burger with fries, pizza, or any old snack. But the main attraction of customers came for their ice cream. It was all home-made right in the store and the best around.

    With business booming the owner came up with an idea to bring in even more people; The Mystery Flavor of the Week. Each week he would pick a flavor and make a special batch, he made the ice cream white and no smell what so ever. That way the only way you could know the mystery flavor was by tasting it. Each week a new flavor, a new mystery, and hundred’s flooded in to find out the new flavor.
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    The night arrived and Namine and Roxas walked into the ice cream parlor hand in hand. They walked up to the bar area and ordered. “One hot-fudge sundae,” Namine said. “And one sea-sal…” Roxas started to say only to be shot down by the look on Namine’s face. “You promised!” she warned. “Ha ha... yeah, I forgot. Sorry,” Roxas added quickly placing his hands behind his head in a familiar mannerism. “One mystery flavor… in a dish,” he said sourly.

    The owner happily dished out the ice cream and handed it to them. Roxas paid for it with his munny and looked nauseatingly at the strange ice cream before him. “Let’s sit outside on the patio so we can watch the sunset,” Namine said happily walking ahead of Roxas. They took a seat at a cozy table for two and watched as the sun made it’s lazily descent. “I’m proud that you’re trying something new, Roxas,” Namine said while digging into her sundae.

    “Me too…” Roxas said half-heartedly. He stared at the unfamiliar ice cream thinking somehow it would be his demise. All he wanted was some delicious sea-salt ice cream. Is that really so much to ask for? He thought to himself. “Well, aren’t you going to try it?” Namine said stubbornly, almost half way through her sundae.

    “Yeah, a promise is a promise,” the sandy-blonde haired boy said. The slender blonde girl with her bright blue eyes, smiled at him, reassuring him it would be okay. She leaned over and gave him a quick kiss on the cheek. He had to do it; there was no turning back now.

    Roxas gulped and look nervously at the strange ice cream before him; with its eerie white color and its odd odorless being. He slowly picked up his spoon and gradually placed it into the creamy ice cream. He attempted to take the least amount possible that would fit on the spoon. As he raised the spoon to his mouth bit by bit, his had quivered. Then opening his mouth he placed the ice cream in.

    Namine squirmed excitedly in her seat. Roxas slowly worked the ice cream around in his mouth letting it melt. His sour look of puzzlement slowly changed into a smile. “Mmmmm… This is really good!” he said taking another spoonful. “See I told you, you’d like it,” Namine said rather proud of herself. “Yeah, it actually is good,” Roxas said smirking somewhat, while taking another spoonful.

    “So what flavor is it?” Namine asked inquisitively. “Try it for yourself,” Roxas said. “Oka…” Namine started to say as Roxas shoved a spoonful in her mouth. Roxas smirked as Namine’s face gave a heated expression. “What flavor, you ask? Why it’s sea-salt ice cream,” Roxas said smirking at his own luck. Namine tossed the spoon into Roxas dish and crossed her arms, “You really lucked out!” she exclaimed. “Why yes I did,” Roxas said smugly. “Shut up and eat your DAMN ice cream!” Namine said irately. “I love you too,” Roxas said happily, kissing her.
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    Hope you enjoyed! >:3
     
  2. O R A N G E C is the heavenly option

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    Great job!

    I never pictured Namine being that giggly or Roxas being that...feirce :3, but you did a great job with it making it seem as if it really were them. I love all your stories XDD
     
  3. Soku Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Lol, Roxas needs to get a room. Anyway great chapter.
     
  4. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    Like I said it's more of a "crack" story. So they're prob out of their norm. XD Fun to write and fun to read type of story. The second half is being post-poned at the moment.
     
  5. Soku Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Lol, thats okay. But they probably would be like that in the future, who knows. :lol:
     
  6. HOSPITAL STAT! i knock tits

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    Oh, LOLOLOL.

    XD This fic made me giggle. It's perfectly fluffy and cute. Plus I'm very fond of crack-ish stuff >:3 At least now I know I should pay more attention to your work XD Great job!

    (Mystery flavor...HMMMMMMMMMMMM. I'm thinking of something creamy-white, sticky, and salty...>:333333)
     
  7. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    Awww... thanks! ~_~
    :yessir:
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    UPDATE: the second and final half is up!!!
     
  8. Very Berry Gummi Ship Junkie

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    oh lmy gosh that was such an amazing story i guess that's the other side of roxas and namine
     
  9. Shuhbooty moon child

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    Wow that stoy got me going, I laughted so many times. Love it!
     
  10. TAFKAA8 Banned

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    I saw it coming but it didn't make it any less funny. I loled IRL.
     
  11. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    Thanks!
    Any criticism would be helpful too. Or you can post your likes... ^_^

    Yep... main point was to get you laughing.
     
  12. HOSPITAL STAT! i knock tits

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    Awwws....:3 Sho mushily cute. I got more of a warm and fuzzy feeling inside XD Thanks for the story Dolleh.

    As a little crit about your presentation, normally when a different person is speaking, you start on a new line. It's just easier to follow/know when it's someone else's turn to speak.

    But I guess it's just a matter of choice, since I know a couple of other good writers who set out their stories like you do. It's just a tad bit harder to read like this P:
     
  13. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    Thank you! ~_~
    And you're welcome.

    Critism! Horray! I know... I always have a hard time bringing myself to do that. lol XD

    I will try next time! ^_^

    *glomp*
     
  14. Spitfire I'm a little high, and a little drunk.

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    Oh that made me smile so....i found it very good.
     
  15. HOSPITAL STAT! i knock tits

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    That's odd. You were never taught that at school? LOL.

    Kay, well next time I hope to see changes then! =D *mwah*
     
  16. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    I really never have to write anything with dialogue in school. Just reports and boring shat like that.

    Unless I take a writing class, but I wouldn't do that. Because... pssssst!
    *whispers*
    I hate writing.

    XD
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    I only had to write one narative story this year. I ended up doing it at the last minute and doubling the requirements, but I never got it back.
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    Thank you Kyle!
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    >:3
     
  17. Tootsie coquí

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    That was awfully cute!
    I loved Roxas' emotions,also I love your writting style.
    Keep up the good work!
    ...now I want some ice cream x]
     
  18. Rosey Chaser

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    Lol, Roxas has issues with Ice cream.

    I thought it was very good.

    Keep up the good work!!!
     
  19. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    X3
    Crack storys are fun.

    Thanks!
     
  20. Rosey Chaser

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    Its true...crack stories are the best....

    You should do a sorta series of these, each one with a different Kh charactor, but with roxas always having an issue with da ice cream