Digital Art First Sig. Lots of CnC Please.

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  1. Kiburedo Traverse Town Homebody

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    Version 1: [​IMG]




    Version 2: [​IMG]




    Well, here's my first sig. Ever. I know I went a little wild with the C4Ds but..... That's all I know how to do at the moment :sweatdrop: Anyway, still trying to figure out most of the functions on Photoshop, so any Comments or help would be appreciated.
     
  2. Hubba-Bubba-Bubbles Hollow Bastion Committee

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    that's very good for a first sig mine sucked very muchly xD well here's some CnC not much but i hope it helps


    1)the render doesn't really fit into the background
    2)try to make the border a bit smaller(my opinion) it's kinda too big

    nice job and BTW the version 2 rocks :)
     
  3. Kiburedo Traverse Town Homebody

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    Ah, makes sense. I'll make the border smaller in a bit, as for the render, I have no clue about that ._.

    Oh, and thanks. XD
     
  4. Xidon Traverse Town Homebody

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    Those aren't c4d renders, but fractals from what I can tell.


    Anyhow I would strongly advise you to look up some tutorials, on sites like planetrenders and such and also when using a stock show a lil more the just the head, or else you'll get fhs (floating head syndrome lol), so rather resize the stock you are using then just showing the head.

    Nice for a first tho...
     
  5. Kiburedo Traverse Town Homebody

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    Ok, I'll keep all that in mind. And you're right about the fractals, I couldn't tell the difference for a bit there ._.
     
  6. Cherry Berry Chaser

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    Well, it is one of the greatest, however:

    There's too much going on in the background in the colour version

    Aside from that, I loved the way you've rendered it...

    Not bad for a start!!