Traditional Art First Drawing in a while

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  1. rikurep Gummi Ship Junkie

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    It looks pretty good... and just be sure you fix the arms a bit xDDDD ..... unless it's meant to be cut o.o...
     
  3. Dinny I am Anime ( ⚈้̤͡ ◡ ⚈้̤͡ )

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    Wow~! This is good :]

    Your OC is unique I must say ;] Also, you're coloring is very well done just needs shading but I'm impressed at how you've drawn the clothes :]
    Hands need a little work... but hands are tricky~! x3 Good job here~!

    I like the heart~! 8D
     
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    Kwl I like the haistyle and colour, and the breaking heart makes him seem more unique. Shading (that DT mentioned) would add some relasim that I think would add to it a lot, but other than that it's really good!
     
  5. rikurep Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Thanks, and yeah, the right arm did cut off, mostly because I didn't draw anything after that, but if you are talking about the other arm I'll try and fixe it as best as I can


    Thanks, I'm glad you like Raxen. And I'll probably add more shading, it's just that the coat shading is tricky. And yeah, hands are a real problem for me. And thanks, I like the heart in this pic as well. I did it pretty well if I do say so.

    Thanks, glad you like him, and like I said I'll try to get more shading in ^^.
    But anyways thank you!
     
  6. Cocohints "Up to now, the most discussed topic is global war

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    Hawt character is hawt.

    My advice when you shade the Org outfit would be to remember what kind of fabric it is made of. It's leather like, right? That means that the highlights will be very sharp. Leather is very much like any metal, it has a smooth surface making it extra shiny in light. If it is wet that adds even more shine. If it helps you could look at how real leather coats look like, like... google for Matrix or something. :3

    Also, your Roxas Wright signature rocks. XD
     
  7. rikurep Gummi Ship Junkie

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    XD glad you think so

    But thanks, I'll try that on the coat, and I'll show an updated one later on. And thanks for the comment on my sig! Lolz
     
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    thats awesome XD
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    hmm i think i commented on this one before ... or was that your other awesome art word XD
    well anyways keep up the good work
    well done :]
     
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    Awesome hair and eyes! The cloak is drawn really good.
     
  10. Xephos Neko, gamer, animelover, and artist :3 *purrs*

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    Looks like Riku but it's not Riku. XD But nice artwork. ^^
     
  11. rikurep Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Thanks, but I can't really say that you have, because of my long absence here, you either did that a long time ago or you did it in the few days that I have been back here, either way I don't remember, Lolz. But anyways I appreciate it.

    Thanks, I was trying out a new style with the eyes, my drawings normally have more tetsuya nomura style one. But I honestly prefer these ones better.

    Xd really? I guess I can see riku in him, Anyways thank you
     
  12. Vexen_Is_God Gummi Ship Junkie

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    I love the way you draw clothing. Nice colouring job too.
     
  13. rikurep Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Thanks a lot ^^
     
  14. Vexen_Is_God Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Do you take requesties? Haha.
     
  15. rikurep Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Sure I do, What is it you want drawn? You can tell me here or PM me
     
  16. rikurep Gummi Ship Junkie

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    I took what you guys said and updated the picture on the first page, the face and coat now have shading on it! Enjoy! :D
     
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    Would have been nice if you had put some detail on the zipper, but that asides I can't find all that much to complain about.
     
  18. Vexen_Is_God Gummi Ship Junkie

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    I want a picture of Vexen/Larxene, any pose you please. If you can do that it'd be great.
     
  19. rikurep Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Yeah thanks, I don't think I'll do anything with the zipper really. =/

    And yes, I'll get you a pic of Vexen in soon ^^ you want it colored?
     
  20. Vexen_Is_God Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Doesn't matter to me. I just need more Vexen.