Be happy D: KairiXRiku- No Air Jordan Sparks ft Chris Brown http://video.kh-vids.net/video/1bc226e3-a00c-4e2a-9ab2-9ab901220bb3.htm
I'll just list some things (hope I don't sound too harsh ^_^): -I like the idea of Kairi & Riku :) -Try not to use random scenes, even if they have the characters you're looking for. -Repeating scenes is bad, though everybody does that at least once, so its forgivable. -The "Mr. Undercover R&B" things cut the song at certain bits and got annoying >.> Try using a file of the song without that stuff. -Although you meant it to be Riku/Kairi, some scenes were kinda confusing cause they had Sora too. Keep Sora out of it XD -You kept going from KH1 to KH2 and back. Try making it progressive from KH1 to KH2. Tips I'm sure everybody will give you: -Try following the beat of the song. Not like every beat, but at least the major ones. -Utilize transitions and effects. Some sepia would be good for like if Riku or Kairi were having flashbacks and stuff, and maybe flashes for the major beats (but don't get crazy with flashes like I did once) -The intros and credits in WMM are kinda bland normally. Try using images for their backgrounds instead of a solid color, and maybe use a less formal text. That's all...its still better than my first vid, so don't feel bad ^_^
