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  1. ...::/final_falling\::... King's Apprentice

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    Fire
    ...::by iChristian::...


    the fire
    burning inside you
    waiting to explode in your heart
    its your courage
    in the deepest night
    it burns through the deepest darkness
    the horror
    dying, fading
    from the light of that fire
    that light, your courage
    fighting its way through your horror
    don't be afraid to keep on living
    don't be afraid to walk this world alone

    FIN

    how is it?
    rep appriciated!! XD
     
  2. Azure Flame Banned

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    Wow that's deep. Good job!
     
  3. ...::/final_falling\::... King's Apprentice

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    THANK U!!!i think i did good too...for once
     
  4. Ratchet Bah weep graaagnah wheep ni ni bong!

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    That's a great poem and comes straight from the heart. Brilliant.
     
  5. Shigome .:a dreamer:. Merlin's Housekeeper

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  6. ...::/final_falling\::... King's Apprentice

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    thanks mum, it did come from meh heart ^_^

    thanks!i cant wait tillanniexo sees it!^^
     
  7. Alice Banned

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    Hey, iPraise, care to explain why making alts is fun? :3

    After really studying some modern poetry, I can't tell what's decorated and what's real anymore. It's so easy to make a poem that sounds professional and deep nowadays. I would know, that's how I got an A for the life-related poetry assignments I got this year.
     
  8. ...::/final_falling\::... King's Apprentice

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    =.=" im iChristian


    why do i think its fun?because im speaking from my heart, i dont care if its professional or not, but this was from meh heart!
     
  9. Alice Banned

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    I think you slurred some of the comments in my post together...when I said "Is making alts fun, I implied, "Is making alternate aliases fun?" I'm assuming that you're iPraise and just made another account under a different email address. Considering your Sonic sig, and obviously, alias. I wasn't referring to your poem until the second string of sentences that were separated by the space~
     
  10. ...::/final_falling\::... King's Apprentice

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    >> ask Sara if im iP or Sora Lexa, whos 11, and is in SC.DOES HE KNOW THAT?!no.and why was he just on?!-.-
     
  11. Alice Banned

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    Could you please make your post clearer. I'm sorry, your speech is kind of illegible in regards of getting the actual phrase...
     
  12. ...::/final_falling\::... King's Apprentice

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    what are u talking about?!im NOT iP.
     
  13. Kiryu Setsuna F. Seiei

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    Isn't Ipraise your brother?
     
  14. Alice Banned

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    Okay, I'm just going to end this conversation. You obviously aren't even reading my posts. I can tell by your reading comprehension you aren't iP...
     
  15. ...::/final_falling\::... King's Apprentice

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    no, but i act like it, huh?


    -Alice-

    im in the 5th grade, what do u expect?! -.-
     
  16. Alice Banned

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    *didn't know 10 yr. olds lurked the intarwebs*

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  17. ...::/final_falling\::... King's Apprentice

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    well I do.no one in meh class is on here--no, no one in my SCHOOL comes on here.
     
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