this is an itty bitty story I thought up last night, haven't written all of it yet Chappie 1 “Namine?” Roxas called from the kitchen. “What is it?” Namine asked. “What do you want for dinner?” He questioned. “Uh…whatever you made last Tuesday was good.” Namine replied as she set down her pencil. “Gulag? Okay, it’ll be about 45 minutes!” Roxas agreed happily. Namine closed her notebook and looked around her room. Everything was white, even the flowers on the end table by her bed. One wall was a huge picture window that overlooked the crystal blue ocean. She still couldn’t believe it, they had finally found a home. The Destiny Islands were like heaven on earth, sandy white beaches, tall palm trees, and all her friends were there. She had found a job that payed the bills and so did Roxas. He was a cook at ‘Le Petit Cuisine’ and she was a largely un-recognized artist. “Dinner’s ready!” Roxas yelled up the stairs. “Coming.” Namine yelled back and set her notebook on her bed. Everything was happening too quickly. First she was saved, then Roxas got up the guts to ask her out, and now they were living together.
It is short, but it's a good chapter. I like the thing with Namine and Roxas living together thingy;D Keep up the work, looking forward to the other chapters.
sorry, but they're fun to play with. chapter 2 is written and I'll post it tomorrow. full of mushieness and a suspensefull end
Chappie 2 Namine ran down the stairs and into the dining room. She gasped as she looked around. The lights were dimmed and two tall, red candles had been lit and were placed on the oak dining table. Between the candles sat a bottle of red wine. Even the napkins had been delicately folded into neat little triangles. Namine ran over and glomped Roxas. She gave him a little kiss and told him “God, I love you as much as a nobody can.†“And I love you in the same way. Let’s eat before the food gets cold.†Roxas replied. Namine sat down and he poured wine into her glass. Then he sat down and they chatted as they ate about the three years between their first meeting and now. As they dined Roxas silently reached under the table and grabbed Namine’s hand. His strong hand enclosing her delicate one. “Do you know what tonight is?†Roxas asked. “Is it Donald’s birthday already?†Namine groaned. “No silly!†Roxas laughed “Tonight’s our third year anniversary of when we first met.†“Oh my gosh! I can’t believe I forgot!†Namine gasped. “It’s okay, I just want to ask you something.†Roxas told her. “What?†“Will you marryme?†I know It's short. Sorry 4 dblposting
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! if you make her say no, I SHALL WACK YOU REPETEDLY OVER THE HEAD WITH A STUGGLE BAT! :yelling:
I THIRD THE HITTING WITH A STRUGGLE BAT!!!! And Forget What My Nobody Says! Btw the story is really good...
