Digital Art Final Countdown

Yeah, SOTW entry, looked better in BW since the colors were quite bleh =\. I know, depth isn´t that good, I´m trying to fix it right now xD

CnC? :D.

 

Looks good, but the light at the bottom is too grey-ish.

And for a suggestion on the text, since it looks like the text is coming out of the light, you should probably make it perpendicular to it.

So maybe move it down to the bottom left of the light and then erase the left side rather than the right.

 

I honestly tried to do what I could for the right side xD.

 

It looks great now, but the light source is really big and takes up too much space, IMO. Maybe try cropping the bottom a little bit. Right side looks good, just have the dots fade out a little.

 

How´s this?

Oh, and thanks for the CnC, everyone xD.

 

A lot better. You now have yourself a bon-utiful sig! :3

Nao go Cnc mine. ;D

 

Cropped version looks 10x better. Try burning the edges of the huge light and blend it into the dark bg a little if possible. Otherwise it's wonderful.

Also, go CnC my sig guys. >: I have 0 posts in it. Have sympathy! XD