Fear

Discussion in 'Archives' started by SnoofyXChristhor, May 31, 2007.

  1. we feel its power seeping into us
    holding us back like a leech
    it stops us and ruins us
    causing us pain and misery

    We try to overpower it,
    but it never leaves us
    Eating away
    delving deep into our soul
    it brings out the worst in us.

    People say it isn't there
    but how can we feel it eating away
    if truly it was not there we would be complete.
    But remember.
    It is not the true us
    it is a mere thorn on the rose of our lives
    we must overcome it throw it away.

    It drives us insane
    It hates us
    Sometimes it seems like it is us.
    But I'm here telling you.
    It's not you, its me.
     
  2. Desmonic Kingdom Keeper

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    WOW!! Cool poem...it's powerfull and meaningfull! Really nice job!
     
  3. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    Very good poem.
    Its speaks the truth!
     
  4. Thanks, at first I thought it wasn't thhat good, but a frined helped me realise it was ok.
     
  5. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    I know that feeling.
    But if you have more poems and were thinking about posting them... please do! ^_^

    I would love to read any others!
     
  6. Desmonic Kingdom Keeper

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    So would I! :D
     
  7. Would you like the rest of my collectioN?
     
  8. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    I would!
    Please and thank you!
    =D
     
  9. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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  10. Yaynesss, I'm not all that bad then =D