FanFiction story help..

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ugh have been to fanfiction?? they did kingdom hearts mix with naruto!! naruto mix with bleach bleach mix with kingdom hearts + bbs charaters is on the kingdom hearts section where name is .

 

I am laughing so hard right now

 

AND YOU HONESTLY THINK THAT THIS IS ANY BETTER?
I HATE YOU SO MUCH.
TRY TO IMAGINE ME SETTING YOU ON FIRE.
I KNOW I CAN'T ACTUALLY DO IT BUT PLEASE JUST IMAGINE IT IT'S THE BEST I CAN DO.
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why do you even hate me!!?

 

BECAUSE YOU ARE EVERYTHING WRONG WITH THE WORLD AND PEOPLE LIKE YOU ARE WHY PEOPLE THINK THAT FINAL FANTASY AND KINGDOM HEARTS ARE FOR IDIOTS.
AND PEOPLE LIKE YOU ARE THE REASON THAT NOBODY TAKES FANFICTION SERIOUSLY.
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Hey lay off Bushido! She tried to write fan fiction and well, it didn't turn out so good. She was looking for constructive criticism, not an all out bashing!

 

I DONT CARE
SHE NEEDED TO HEAR THIS SOONER OR LATER
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Jeez Xakota...You don't have to be such a jerk...

You could at least be polite with your opinion of what she made...

 

...NEXT THING your GONNA PAY WHAT YOU SAID PEOPLE WANNA BE CREATIVE U DON"T!!! SO BACK OFF LET US ALL BE CREATIVE FOR ONCE!! grammer bad still LET ALL KHV BE CREATIVE!!!

 

Right back at you.

 

I SUPPORT CREATIVITY.
I DON'T SUPPORT SHІT IN THE FORM OF TEXT. THAT IS WHAT YOU POSTED HERE.
WHY DON'T YOU GO TO THE FANFICTION SECTION, READ A DECENT STORY AND SEE IF YOU LEARN SOMETHING.

Jaden, if i took a shіt all over your favorite games, would you be polite about it? Yeah, that's pretty much what she did. this is an INSULT to FF, KH, and their fans.

 

God Xakota...Is this how you treat girls in real life?

EDIT: Oops, I didn't see your last post...

But still, it's not like she meant any harm...

 

Okay, as amusing as this is...

*bonk*

*bonk*

Bushy, take a breather. There's no need to jump down the young lady's throat for expressing herself. Not everyone begins their life as a paragon of literary taste and culture, and belligerent screaming is most certainly not going to help in the slightest. If this bothers you so much, you should make a concerted effort to help her, not berate her for a wrongdoing she's not even aware of.

As for you, ZW... I'm afraid the reason there's been so much backlash at your story is because, frankly, it's not that entertaining. Your work strikes me as intensely amateurish. Yes, I know it sounds harsh, but I only say this for your benefit; writing is not a thing for the casual hobbyist. If you really enjoy writing and you want to continue, I can give you a foundation so you can make some good work that won't result in... well, this thread.

 

This is how i treat idiots in real life. Regardless of gender.

 

Why don't you cool off somewhere, you know this just makes you look like an exaggerated idiot. You don't have to read this if you don't want to. So excuse me, Bushido, since you so obviously know how to make a perfect story.

Now, Zexion's real wife. I recommend you reconsider, re-read, and examine your story. While Bushido is being out of place, he is right in the fact that this isn't very original. Writing well takes quite a bit of effort. I advise you read some good fan-fictions and see how they integrate their characters and plot into an already established world.