Fairytale

This is a song I wrote a few months ago called "Fairytale". It requires a boy and a girl to sing it. I actually got the idea of writing this song after playing Kingdom Hearts 2. I hope you like it!!!

Verse 1:

(Girl)
That girl in the back of the class
Is me,
what's she thinkin' about?
You'll see
When she looks at him, looks at him now
(Boy)
That boy who's lookin' back
Is he
The one she wants to ask
To be
The boy of her, boy of her dreams?

Chorus 1:

(Girl)
Why can't everything(everything)
(Boy)
Be like a fairytale(fairytale)?
(Girl)
I'll be the queen, and you, the king
(Boy)
Our lives would turn out so well
Yeah

Verse 2:

(Girl)
She's sad, a princess in blue
And she's trapped in her castle of doom,
And she asks
"Will that prince ever save me, ever save me now?"
(Boy)
He loves the girl stuck in the castle
And he's fought over a thousand battles,
He's gone to save her
Nothing's gonna bring him, bring him down

Chorus 2:

(Girl)
Why can't everything(everything)
(Boy)
Be like a fairytale(fairytale)?
(Girl)
I'll be the queen, and you, the king
(Boy)
Our lives would turn out so well
(Girl)
If he can't save me, then who will?
(Boy)
If she can't amaze me, then who will?
(Both)
I'll search the world until I find you, baby

(Guitar Solo)

Bridge:

(Girl)
Place my lips upon his,
Never felt quite like this
I don't wanna let this moment go
So, now you know
Fairytales are possible

(Chorus 2)

Verse 3:

(Girl)
I see his smiling face
(Boy)
This is the perfect place
(Both)
Just wait,
And you'll see sparks, see sparks fly

 

Eh sure,sounds nice(kinda too girly,but nice) but can you tell me the notes...?I sing and play guitar,i'd like to help you.

 

I actually quite liked this xD You picked lyrics that aren't too cliched IMO and they work well together, I like the idea of hidden attraction.


I thought it was a sweet song, I would like to hear the notes though as I had trouble "hearing" the song in my head.

You should write more​

 

Yah it does sound good but it does have its flaws not to be mean.

 

Yeah, I know it sucks, but I'm a beginner!!! You can't blame me for trying!

 

OMG!

Hi Summer!!

Its yo friend Sarah lol

I love your song gurl!

I'm gonna give you a hug when I see you again ;)

 

Purty good, though the echoes on the chorus might get uberly annoying.

Also, this should be in the Creativity Corner. *moves*

 

Thanks for moving it, Misty!!!

P.S. Sadden Blood Warrior, you better come look @ this thread and post a reply!!! lol

 

and wat if i dont lol oh wait im already here xD

ANYWAYS...............

it was good lil bit too gurly for me but good i can only rite raps i cant rite any other type of lyrics well i could maybe but i donno well enuough with that it was good tho seriously

 

Yes, I know it's too girly!!!

Thanks, though!

OMJB I wanna hear one of your raps!!!

Record it and put it on YouTube!!!

 

wen i get a chance ill start riting one rap then start with another then i forget wat i was gonna rite in the one so i dont really have any finished lol

 

That happen to me when I'm writing songs!

OMJB I remember back in my Headstart days, my school was having a talent show, and these 4 or 5 8th graders played in a band, and they were most likely to win.

Until I went up on stage.

Somebody.

Please.

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