So, this is just a little something I was thinking of today. It's not finished, I'm stuck and I've no idea where to go from it. It's kinda choppy and off, so feedback would greatly help :3 Walking down the hallways, focus and concentration elsewhere. Thoughts swirling around you; where could you be? Staring at the screen, only way to talk to my favorite person. Your sweet, seducing words can only be read. Never enjoyed to the full extent for effect. That's all I've got for now D:
It's not so bad. It has some potential if you can get some inspiration so as to branch out from the original few lines.