Digital Art Evryday im shuffuling...

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Shinichi Izumi, Nov 25, 2011.

  1. Shinichi Izumi Totally Pink and stuff

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    Damm text and color came wrong, will fix tomorow


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    Cnc?
     
  2. Ventus PSP Aqua Gummi Ship Junkie

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    lol that looks pretty cool. The first one is kinda trippy with the pattern and colors but still looks good :)
     
  3. Feenie Finny, Fin of the Feenie Fish

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    Hm, I guess this is pretty cool. Though I'm sure you've already noticed that the text on the first one doesn't really go with the background.
    The second one is better, but I think you could be doing with different fonts. You seem to use the same one quite a lot. Not that that's a bad thing.
     
  4. Stella Nox Fleuret Hollow Bastion Committee

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    It's trippy, for sure. The text honestly doesn't fit the images and I couldn't even read the text on the first one. The text on the second one is slightly readable. But everything else is cool, if slightly weird. This is good.
     
  5. Krown King's Apprentice

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    Like everyone one else said, "it's trippy".
    But I think it's still good.
    The text for the first one is hard to read but the text for the second one I find is easy to read.
    Good job. :3
     
  6. ShibuyaGato Transformation

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    Pasting patterns isn't that hard, but the quality of the stock and the background appeal to me.

    The text could use some fixing in terms of placement and color but it's fine overall.
     
  7. Korra my other car is a polar bear dog

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    My suggestion would be to find colors and patterns that flow better together. To be quite honest I'm pretty blinded by it to the point where my eyes don't know where to focus, and that's generally not a good thing in graphic design. In some cases it does work, but they're usually the exception to the rule.
    That being said the text is extremely hard to read, I would recommend looking up some simple stuff about color theory (i.e. what goes together) and maybe some tutorials.
     
  8. Makaze Some kind of mercenary

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    You chose two of my least favorite memes, and you misspelled one of them.

    They are hard to appreciate.

    The only thing that I can add onto what Wolfie said is that you should use something other than MSPaint if you are not already.
     
  9. Iskandar King of Conquerors

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    I can't really appreciate these. I'm sorry, but the colors in the first one just really don't work. You've got the cheetah coat, but then you've got really bright yellow and black in the background; in stripes no less. It just really hurts my eyes, and darker colors with all that yellow in the back doesn't work.
    And the second one is just messy. I mean, you've got all those different blocks, it just seems like a big mess.