Everything comes to sea

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  1. myoblivion King's Apprentice

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    Its a poem I wrote yesterday if anyone wants to post what they think.....here ya go

    Everything come to sea
    I wonder where ill be
    It begins with me

    Sorrows end
    Hearts blend
    Today is the day
    All must pray
    For every wish
    and for the one's we miss

    My memories die
    And locked secrets fly
    I hear his name
    It feels so right
    I have to fight
    So when I find him there will be light

    My heart will beat
    We will meet
    I pray
    Our hearts are together
    You have to remember
    There's only one sky
    Shooting stars fly

    Everything comes to sea
    I wonder how it will be
    When he's here right next to me

    sorry its short
     
  2. Rosey Chaser

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    I thought it was good!!!! It could have flowed better but i thought it was good
     
  3. myoblivion King's Apprentice

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    Thanks I liked your poem too ^.^