V2: I think I am in a slump ;-;. And yes, the effect is supposed to make that Gamma is popping up from the background, CnC please?
Apparently everyone's in a slump. Gamma looks more like he's coming in from the background like a ghost, but it still looks cool.
This sig doesn't flow nearly as much as your others do, the backround doesn't really match the clipping mask very well, maybe use a different type of brush for that part. Also, the purple on the right is very random and doesn't really match up with the rest of the sig very well, either try to get rid of it, or place something over it to dampen it.
Keep the render intact and just Gaussian Blur the rest at about 2 px. You can start from scratch from there. Maybe brushing, C4Ds, etc.
Thanks for the CnC, I decided to make two new versions: I think I am not going to play around with this tag anymore, I have some projects in mind now.