Envy

Eating away in side like a demon in darkness
The envy I am made to feel is growing stronger
I know I must get away from this feeling
But it has already trapped me in it cage.

My will to control this feeling is getting weaker
Please save me from my self
For my envy is pulling me deeper in to the darkness


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I didn't think I've ever know what envy feels like but yesterday I found out... Yeah this is kinda lame, but what the heck enjoy

 

...Heh...how do you do it? I can relate to this so much...Envy Is My Sin...

I still don't get why you were envious, though...(BTW, I didn't read the whole thing, sorry...you know, in that thread...)

 

It's very good! And I know completely how you feel :) good poem!

 

read the last 5ish pages

Thank gald you both like it

 

....I still don't get it...>.>;

 

Go to page 9 or 10

 

Ohhhh....poor anniexo_Lexa....*Hugs*

 

Ah iI've gotten over it, i was just be silly lol

 

I know! lol. You know...I really do Envy a lot....Gawd...I can't wait for school to end...

 

Oh yeah, I know this feeling...

Thankfully, though, I control it well enough so that it doesn't end up making me do something I'd regret. XD;

But, still, awsomely shmexy poem... ^-^

 

Awesome poem sis. I think everyone gets envious at some point in their life. Well described. :)

 

I envy a lot. :( My envy creates anger, and pride of me. People always think that anger is my worst part of me. But its not. The envy creates the anger.

 

Yeah...

I'm pretty sure MY sin is sloth... Cuz I am naught but a lazy bum. XD;

 

Um... what the hell?

 

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Originally Posted by 2Foxxie4U
But, still, awsomely shmexy poem... ^-^

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shmexy... how?
Awesome yes.

Nice poem!
^^