Feelings Desires Compassion Comparhession All of the feelings When something happens It either makes you cry Hurt Happy Saddness It's a powerful feeling Happens a lot When someone dies When someone leaves you When you get stabbed in the back Never really trust anybody I don't Keep a lot of friends Keep a couple good friends Keep a few best friends Don't get a girlfriend Or boyfriend Unless you really care For that person If you don't It's a big mistake Been there Done that Don't care Unless you care Bring back the emotions Bring back the happiness Joy Celebration Cheer Bring back everything Forget about everything That's the plan Stick to it And emotion will take over --------------------------------------------- Just a poem I wrote
I gather this is over you recent break up. Sorry man. It's short, descriptive, and to the point. Well done.
wow... sorry to hear about ur break up... <_> well, i found this poem to be very good... it has a good sens of feeling... but one thing i saw that didn't seem to fit were the one word lines... they didn't flow very well when i read it, yet they added more intensity to the poem... I liked it! good job ^^
