Traditional Art Edward and Alphonse Elric

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  1. Hiro ✩ Guardian

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    Not bad at all. I know that show, too, as it used to be on Cartoon Network's Adult Swim programming block.

    Anyway, I think it could be brighter and have more color, but other than that, it's good.
    Keep it up!

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  3. Heart ❤ Enjoy every moment with all ya got

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    Oh my God! That is beautiful! It looks completely like them! I love how you made details with ed's hair and Al's armor! 5/5! Amazing work!
     
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    I congratulate you for copying off another image, and making it look almost the same.


    Noing to say here, really. Drew this for fun? Not bad then.


    I have nothing to say. (lol I repeated myself) It's just a picture of anime characters. Maybe if you added your own twist to the drawing. You know, refurnished.


    But yeah. Just a drawing.
     
  5. Llave Superless Moderator

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    Well, on a more positive note, you did good! A lot better than most people. I haven't read or watched FA, but i guess i prolly should. They do look like themselves!

    I do agree with what Ferocious said about it being an image you copied, but not everyones gonna be an artist and has to do everything in the head. But if you are aspiring to be, then i would suggest trying to do that.

    The coloring is also well done, i believe you used color pencils. pretty solid throughout, really gives it an anime look. but if you want to up the ante, then try shading it in more and use certain colors to help it look more vibrant:)

    But it does look good! so keep it up and practice practice practice!!!! I would love to see some more of your work as well.
     
  6. Iskandar King of Conquerors

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    this is really good. The hair for Ed seems a bit too stretched, and his eyes seem a bit funny, but I am a perfectionist for this kind of thing. The color is almost near-perfect, and you got facial expressions pretty good.
     
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    I really like the drawing. The details is pretty good for being drawn. I don't know if you traced it or used a reference but either way it looks really good. The background could use some color but other than that it's good.
     
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    ...Some people are not very supportive but well... anyways it's a good piece but remember if you want to draw bodies it would be good to use a number of circles and different shapes to get all the pieces of the body correct. Alphonse is drawn very nicely but remember for Edward, since he's human a lot of perspective needs to be added. Again as every artist says, "It all starts with a circle."

    Have fun and keep drawing! Practice makes perfect!
     
  9. Hiro ✩ Guardian

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    Thanks for the feedback guys! I am really proud of the work i did on this and I did all I could from memory and I used a reference pic for the hard details (Al's symbol, Ed's Automail arm, etc.) and I hope to make it nearly perfect from complete memory and no reference.

    Oh, and it still is on AS, I watch it in HD every Saturday at 11:00 pm