Digital Art Drowning in the rythm...

decided yo try again:3



CnC please.

 

Way better than some of your other stuff, see you tried blending some stuff.

Could I see the render?

The Blending is nice, if a bit dirty, I'm not fond of the blending that comes over her face. Plus, the background isn't 100% present blended with the stock. I'm not loving the text.

Very good, you're improving.

 

The effect around the focal is pretty cool, I like that aspect of this tag. However, the background is kinda boring, and the fact that there are only two colors makes it even more dull. This tag could be tons better if it had more color in it; it'd liven things up, you know?

 

Yeah I gotta work on color and backgrounds ^^;

here's the render:
http://www.planetrenders.net/renders/displayimage.php?album=search&cat=0&pos=4

thanx for the advice you guys :3