Traditional Art Drawings made in school

so since everyone forces us to "get an education" and says that "you'll do better in life with one" were forced to go to prison for 8 hours a day. why not spend those 8 hours doing something productive... like drawing? so i brought some of my KH manga to school and this is the end result. this is all going to be black and white (with some grey) art. i made it mostly during third hour which is like a study hall for me. now please i have a few rules about this thing.
1. No hating on the artist. you can curse about how the art sucks all you want but no hate comments
2. you can post your drawings here too. about anything really but make sure there isnt any nasty stuff.
3. KH RULEZ! (ok i know thats not a rule but it haaaas the word rule in it. ^_^)
and 4. any type of manga,show,or anything that the art is based on is fine but KH would be preffered.
so here it is. my drawing. please comment so i can improve on a sora that im working on.

 

Nice drawing. XD Riku's head seems a little squished and he's a little out of proportion, but it's still really good. :D I shouldn't really be critizing on these things since my best drawings turned out good only because I looked at a manga or picture and drew straight from that.

 

nice drawing it's better than mine's ask your sis she know im good :D

 

heh. yeah i know his head came out ******ed but i have a method of drawing things. i take the original, put it on top of the desk im in, put the paper next to the book, and try to draw it like it is in there. heh :sweatdrop: idk if its what you were talking about blue, but if it is then dont be ashamed. thats the way i do all my drawings unless im desperately bored.

 

Quite nice. <3

I suggest maybe starting with drawing some construction lines, at least a circle, for your next drawing though. Don't worry, it won't get in the way of your system.

 

I've tried that before, trust me, and it doesn't work for me. I appreciate the advice but it's just easier for me to copy the picture piece by piece.